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IELTS Grammar Topics

Academic Writing: Proportions, Percentages, Numbers & Amounts

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Proportion of/ Percentage of:

You can use the proportion of and the percentage of with countable and uncountable nouns:

  • The percentage of students that passed the exam in 2015 was 60%

  • In Turkey and Ireland the proportion of expenditure on food, drinks and tobacco was substantially higher than in the other countries

  • The percentage of respondents to the survey that preferred foreign holidays increased significantly in 2010.

Using Adjectives:

You can use adjectives such as large/ significant/ substantial and small/ insignificant/ tiny with percentage of and proportion of (and the corresponding comparatives e.g. larger, smaller, more substantial etc.)

 

  • A substantial proportion of respondents said that they preferred the colour green, 75%, while only a small proportion, 10%, preferred the colour red.

  • A small percentage of visitors decided to pay for the VIP service in 2014 (10%), while a large percentage chose this option in 2015 (45%). 

  • A tiny percentage of rainforest remained in 2015, at only 2% of the original forest.

(Note that in these cases we begin with the article a or an

 

Adding Adverbs:

You can also add an adverb to intensify the meaning of the adjective e.g. very, much, really, extremely.

 

  • A very small percentage of Malaysians had a bachelor’s degree in science

  • A much larger percentage of Singaporeans have a bachelor’s degree in science than Malaysians.

Is or are?

When talking about one proportion or percentage we use is or was, and when we talk about two or more percentages or proportions we use are and were.

  • It is noticeable that in Turkey the proportion of expenditure on Food drinks and tobacco was substantially larger than in other countries.

  • The proportions of expenditure on Food, drinks and tobacco in Turkey and Ireland were 32.14% and 28.91% respectively.

Percent of/ % of:

Percent of or % of are used directly after a number. They are followed by countable or uncountable nouns.

  • 60 percent of students passed the exam in 2015

  • 34% of applicants failed to pass the exam with grade C or higher

  • 28 percent of land degradation was caused by deforestation.


Amount of and number of:

The amount of is used with uncountable nouns; the number of is used with countable nouns.

  • The amount of meat consumed in China between 1985 and 2010 increased significantly.

  • The amount of water in the lake dropped substantially during the summer months.

  • The amount of pollution produced by coal fired power stations is greater than the amount produced by natural gas power stations.

  • The number of cars in the city grew substantially between 1990 and 2010.

 

When we repeat the number or the amount without the corresponding noun in a comparison, it is not necessary to repeat of.

  • The number of graduates in England is far larger than the number in Switzerland.

  • The amount of oil sold in January is larger than the amount sold in June.

Using Adjectives:

Like percentages, you can use adjectives with amount of and number of such as large/ high/ significant/ substantial and small/ low/ insignificant/ tiny, and comparatives such as larger, smaller etc. With number of and amount of, you can also use limited. In all these cases we begin with ‘a’ or ‘an’. 

  • A large amount of information was stolen by the hackers.

  • A smaller amount of rain fell in 2015 than in 2014.

  • A substantial number of people were arrested for robbery in 2012.

  • A more significant number of complaints were received about faulty products in 2012.

  • A limited number of tickets were sold for the opening night. 



Two times, three times, four times larger/ higher than…:

The proportion/ the percentage/ the number/ the amount of….......was (two/ three/ four etc. times) larger than...........

  • The proportion of spending on Food and Drinks was three times larger than the spending on Clothing and Footwear.

  • The amount of water released by the dam was three times larger in winter than in summer.

  • The percentage of people who said they preferred beef was four times higher than the percentage of people who said that their preference was chicken.

  • The number of women in jail was two times higher in 2005 than in 1975  


Double/ triple the... (...as):

There are two ways to use this structure:

a. There was double/ triple the percentage/ proportion/ amount/ number of………. as ……….

b. The percentage/ proportion/ amount/ number of ………. was double/ triple the percentage etc. of……….. 

(Notice that in (b) we do not use as.)

a. Examples:

  • There was double the percentage of pollution from sulphur dioxide as from smoke.

  • There was triple the number of cars per person in Los Angeles as in Amsterdam.

  • There was double the amount of water in the reservoir in winter as in summer.

b. Examples:

  • The proportion of land degradation caused by overgrazing was triple the amount caused by deforestation.

  • The number of factories shut down in 2009 was double the number in 2016.

  • The amount of pollution from sulphur dioxide was double the amount from smoke.


Doubled/ tripled…:

We use doubled or tripled when we are talking about one proportion, percentage, number or amount (not comparing two).

 

  • The exam pass percentage doubled between 1946 and 1986.

  • The proportion of survey respondents who identified hobbies as important for happiness doubled between 1950 and 2010.

  • The number of applicants for work visas tripled between 1850 and 1900.

  • The amount of sulphur dioxide produced doubled from 1600 to 1800.

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